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    [ Denied ] Soul Guard by CAN0N



    Mistakenly deleted thread by me. Posted again for canon.
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    Here 2 Feedbacks tho:
    Quote Originally Posted by CANi
    + "Okay" sync
    + Outro DA logo scene was nice, Animation was nice
    + SFX okay (some sounds random like the "empty shell" at 0:21 but yeah in general)

    - 0:01 - weird font on intro
    - 0:07 - the logo & text is barely visible
    - 0:08 - random optical flare randomly rotating
    - 0:10 - the text blocks are weird, they are too short & you cant really read it
    - Soul Gaurds
    - 0:27 - Random flickering shells
    - 0:41 - dont think about new slogans, keep the current ones
    Quote Originally Posted by pulsestylez
    + Nice sync
    + Selfmade intros (shows dedication to the team)
    + Overall good SFX


    - Too much Dynamic Arts.
    - HUD elements (http://prntscr.com/gvokmm) were way too fast and barely readable.
    - Optical flares were really random. For example at 0:33 is a optical flare in the house and 0:34 there isn't even though you see more of the sky.
    - FX were also really poorly integrated. The ideas were ok but the implementation was miserable.
    - Even though the SFX were good overall there were sometimes random sounds. For example why is there an empty clip sound? (0:22)


    Another personal - are the excuses from above. People will only see the result. That your computer is bottlenecking on several things won't change the fact that things doesn't fit.

    The appclip got denied, sorry.
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    Tier 7: UberCyborg CAN0N's Avatar
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    yo okay

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    too much dynamic arts for real
    0:00-0:05 intro
    0:07-0:08 intro again
    0:27-0:28 wow dynamic arts
    0:29-0:30 dynamic arts logos in left corner wow
    0:32-end 3 outos
    @lank1zleet

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    I like it , but some of your vfx looks not professional idk heh ) anyway it looks sick man hope next time you will get accepted!

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    also i liked how you did DA intro at the end, looks very nice

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    thanks alot mr pickup i will retry

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