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    Tier 0: Egg JakE-'s Avatar
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    [ Denied ] "RainDrop" by JakE-


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    Tier 4: Genius Lex's Avatar
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    First of all, i should let u know that im a trial and what i think of your app wont count as a vote or anything, i just want to let u know what i think about it.
    Ok, so, to begin with, i think uve improved a ton since ur previous edits and while the concept of this is awesome and it has some great scenes, it feels unpolished, perhaps a bit rushed. The sfx, cines and some visuals were great but the main problem were the cuts, the pacing and some transitions. Anyways, ill let the big boys vote haha. Good luck!
    hihi

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    Its good but i think not enough.
    The atmosphere is really catchy but i dont feel the effects are well made.
    They look as lex said unpolished & raw...

    I wish you would took more time into that & shared some betas because we like to give feedback and the results turn out better.

    A no from me.

    Cheers,
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    Tier 9: A.I. Experiment DeymonWR's Avatar
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    really enjoyable

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    cc could be better

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    Tier 4: Genius cherry's Avatar
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    I'm a trial like lex and what he said about what he think of your app wont count as a vote or anything is the same for me.
    I'll tell you things that i feel you could've made better (mainly small details, i'm really annoying about that), please don't take this as a personal thing, just criticism.

    0:09 - the clock is a good idea and the sfx of it with the syncing of the logos is nice (even tho the intro its too long), but you forgot to mask the background's clock http://prntscr.com/giugx7.
    0:25 - the cine lagged (2 frames are freezed).
    0:27 - as i've said to you, the clouds with lightning looks nice but doesnt make sense at all, it would only make sense if was a ground in the red line http://prntscr.com/giukbg.
    0:31 - we cant see this text clearly, so bright.
    - the sfx is good even tho some of them doesnt make sense (c4 being planted, "we're goind home" radio) and i hate the new csgo sounds.
    - your killfeed its too big and i dont remember seeing a preview with it (so i could not tell you before).
    - the shake is annoying and dont fit to the song imo.
    yo wassup

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    Tier 7: UberCyborg xniosy's Avatar
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    Atmosphere is there. Not much dedication to DA (Intros..). A lot of things could have been cleaned up.

    0:28 This doesn't look that great, can see what you were going for but it doesn't work for me. (font, stroke on the text, bit bright and harsh to the eye.)
    0:35 Hard cut.

    The rotations also got tiring. A bit more polishing and showing some more interest in us before applying to join would be nice. You can easily pull off some sick work with a little more time and practice.

    No from me.

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    +Amazing atmosphere.
    +DOF using overall was pretty good and realistic.
    +Smooths were great in general.

    -1:00 DOF/Fog-layer - should have just gone with another smooth since I know it's not fixable right now.
    -1:20 muzzleflash behind the model - could be easily fixed by masking.
    -Overall the effects could be better executed.

    Personal opinions:
    The colors are sometimes a bit to bright.
    In the first scene the thunder/lightning scene doesn't fit the overall atmosphere.

    Also a no from me for now. But don't be scared to app again. Work on the critism you got and try app again. I'm sure if you work on the bad points and maybe even improve your good points you'll be accepted with your next application.

    Regards-

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    Tier 11: Uber-A.I Discord User
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    Hey sorry,

    Denied

    Work on the points we mentioned above & be sure to re-app! You got a pretty solid base! You just need to polish abit your effects .

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    CANi
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    GL next time bro

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